Since you've freely given me leave to love,
What will you respond?
Shall I your mirth, or emotion move,
When I begin to pursue;
Will you distress, or disdain, or love me too?
Every minor beauty can reject, and I
Spight of your aversion
Lacking your consent can see, and perish;
Dispense a nobler Lot!
It is effortless to destroy, you could fashion.
Thus allow me leave to cherish, & adore me too
Without purpose
To elevate, as Affection's cursed rebels act
When whining Versifiers lament,
Fame to their grace, from their weeping gaze.
Grief is a pond and mirrors not distinct
One's grace's rayes;
Joyes are untainted streames, your vision appear
Sullen in more sorrowful verses,
In happy lines they gleam brilliant with prayse.
That shall not refer to describe you fair
Wounds, blazes, and darts,
Storms in your brow, nets in your locks,
Bribing all your attributes,
Or to betray, or afflict trapped souls.
I’ll make your vision like morning suns appear,
Like gentle, and fayr;
Thy countenance as crystal even, and pure,
And your dishevelled locks
Will flow like a calm Area of the Atmosphere.
Rich Nature's store (which is the Writer's Treasure)
I will expend, to adorn
Your charms, if your Wellspring of Delight
With matching appreciation
Thou but release, so we each other bless.
The piece delves the relationship of affection and acclaim, where the speaker speaks to a woman who requests his love. Rather, he proposes a shared exchange of literary admiration for private delights. This language is refined, mixing courtly norms with candid expressions of desire.
Through the verses, the author spurns common tropes of one-sided passion, such as sadness and lamentation, arguing they obscure true grace. He prefers happiness and admiration to showcase the maiden's attributes, assuring to render her eyes as bright stars and her hair as streaming air. This method highlights a realistic yet skillful perspective on bonds.
Rich Nature's hoard (which is the Writer's Riches)
I’l expend, to adorn
One's graces, if your Mine of Pleasure
Through equal gratitude
You but release, so we mutually bless.
This section summarizes the essential deal, where the writer pledges to employ his artistic gifts to honor the maiden, as compensation for her receptiveness. This wording combines devout overtones with physical yearnings, adding depth to the verse's message.
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